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I hate love poems.
I am sick to death with,
“How soft are his lips”,
“The curve of her hips”,
I don’t want to hear about these fallacies you build up in your head,
And write in your little black book to show your friends,
Pretending you’re some great poet.
The world is filled with billions of topics, and yet,
Nine times out of ten,
Amateurs, with their books of words
And rhyming dictionaries,
Chose to write about an emotion, a fear of loneliness.
“Her golden hair”,
“His chocolate stare”,
I can’t take it anymore.
One at a time, you march onto stage, and squint in the glaring spotlight
As you smile at the faceless, dark audience
And pour out your thoughts on love
With bad rhyming and questionable syncopation.  
Poem after poem after poem
“I feel his hands upon my neck”,
“When you’re gone I am a wreck”,
And I sit there, on that itchy green sofa and wish
With every single bone in my body,
Going past the bones and wishing with every inch of myself,
That I was anywhere but here.
©2004-2010 ~illdnkim
:iconilldnkim:

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I went to a poetry reading on my campus and not only were the poems mostly crap, they were all about love. Being the bitter, cynical bitch that I am I only got about half-way through and then I felt the urge to kill something, so I left. I want to read this at the next poetry reading and scream at everyone

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:iconjessie-bo-bessy:
nice :)
i never heard a anti love poem before - sweet idea

much luv
peace
:iconyoullneverguess:
wow..tis really good.....
Its also very different.....I've never heard anything like it.
:iconmitsukai-aka:
I love this. I understand the wanting to kill something, I might seem like a hypocrite with what I have up on here, nut those are some of my worst poems, this though is beyond good, this is magnificent. You can feel the undadulterated disgust in this, Im happy.
:iconsincerely-henry:
i like it! ^_^

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Sincerely yours,
Henry.

:music:Sing a Hymn for the Dead..Because if your Dead or Alive your one in the same.:sing:
:icon10partspeanut:
THANK YOU!
BTW, Valentines time should be called Single Awareness DAY!
any thoughts?

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Persons attempting to find meaning in this narrative will be put to death. ~ Inkheart
:iconxbrokenxheartedx18:
Wow.. i really like this.. i usually write anti love poems but i never got so intense with mine!
:iconhorser55:
omg, that is halarious! i love it!!!

--
Life is a test of patience.

:iconDesigningDivas:
:iconpyro-pain:
*claps* at least someone is honest

--
pyro-pain
The world chewed me up and spat me out, apparently I was too bitter for its tastes.
:licking: Human Popsicles...

Proud Little Sister Of :iconscaredy-puppy:
Proud Older Sister of :icontsukiko1313:
:iconhereshestands:
nice, well done :)

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~ ßεc ~

♥ I can stop and catch my breath and look no further for happiness. And I will not turn again cos my heart has found its home.♥
:icondeeraii:
Really intense. It's definitely different, and I like it. <3

--
On the Keyboard of Life, always keep one finger on the escape key.

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